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Friday 22 October 2021

My Exciting Holiday..

Kia Ora people, 
I have got this slide from my teacher. My class and I have had a week to do this. We are really good at writing. We did our final day yesterday so I had to finish a little today. Today we went in a group of three. in my group, I had Marsali Matthew, and me. We had turns reading out the things we did in the holiday. I was last because I was scared I had to pay attention to the person who was talking then give them feedforward and feedback. 

Here is my writing you can read it if you want - 


Reflection: I think I could put more punctuation and writing. 

Question: What did you do in the holidays?

Bye

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