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Friday 19 October 2018

this is my writing from the hole week and letter

 I went ice skating in the holidays and it was fun. This is a letter to Alpine Ice Sports ice skating. It was awesome. I won spin the bottle.







495 Brougham

Street, Opawa,

Christchurch 8023


15/10/2018

Dear Alpine Ice Sports
hI visited you in the school holidays .You have a giant ice rink I love it. I lean how to ice skate really fast so
quick. The thing the cleans the ice it’s really cool to watch. It’s so much fun. It was my  froth time and it was awesome. I won spin the bottle and it was my first time.  I got cotton candy it was yum. I had to share some of my cotton candy with a girl that came with us. My dad got another bag of cotton candy for the other two girl’s to share. I was so surprised. I sleped over a lot. It was a lot of fun.

The girl gave the boy the ticket. The boy gave it to me because one of the girls there gave it to him. He was very kind. Me and my dad thinks she likes the boy. I said it is us.  She still gave it to the other guy next to us. It wasn't fair.

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