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Thursday, 14 November 2019

My post card

The whole week I and my class have been making fake pictures of us somewhere we want to really really go to this is mine. I have wanted this before and I even asked my Dad. We have put them in a postcard this is mine but I have to work on my writing. here it is😋.
I see... The bunch of people around me.


I hear... people lament for their sons, husbands, and people lament for their husbands.


I taste… The fresh air of the diminish air from the smoke from the bombs.


I smell… The soldier’s clothes scent like dirt.

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8 comments:

  1. Miss WaltersNovember 27, 2019 6:44 pm

    Kia ora Ema-Leigh!

    It is great to see you back blogging at Gilberthorpe! TM has just finished this activity too! You look like you're inside the set of Harry Potter! It looks amazing - what do you think would be the coolest part of where you are visiting? We found it a bit tricky taking photos of ourselves on our chromebooks because some of the settings had been changed and we had to use our initiative to solve the problem.

    What was the hardest part of making your post card?

    From Miss W :)

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  2. AnonymousDecember 11, 2019 3:54 pm

    Hello Miss Walters have you looked at the comments i have sent to some of my friends and some other people that i have done. there were no hard bits of doing this. do you have time for a question you do okay here we go are you still with the year 3s and 4s? is the a different teacher and if there is what the teachers name?

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    1. Miss WaltersDecember 12, 2019 7:15 am

      Hi Ema-Leigh!

      I have seen the comments and I think they are great! It is great to see you using some awesome sentence starters to help create a quality blog comment. I have been with the Year 3/4 class again this year yes, but I am actually moving to a new school for 2020 :) I'm not sure who is replacing me yet though - I'm sure if you check back next year you might be able to find out :)

      Do you know who your teacher for next year is yet? Bet you're excited to know if you don't yet! :)

      From Miss W :)

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    2. AnonymousDecember 12, 2019 9:37 am

      Hey Miss Walters I don't know who I am having next year I hope i have the teacher that is in the classroom next to me because she is having a baby soon and there is just a teacher replacing her for the rest of the term then next year there is going to be a different person and hopefully I get that person just saying I hope the person is nice and kind bye!

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  3. AnonymousDecember 18, 2019 10:11 am

    Hello Miss W I think I know what teacher I am having next year and I think it is dan dan dan Miss Raisin! I´ve got a question what school are you going to next year and next year I might visit yaldhurst school maybe one day okay I have to go now bye! and can you send a picture of the class to me please and I´ve got one more question do you have this app called hangouts! because I can add you! bye now!

    From Ema-leigh:>

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  4. AnonymousDecember 18, 2019 10:15 am

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  5. AshaswiDecember 18, 2019 10:17 am

    WHat do you mean by h

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  6. AnonymousDecember 18, 2019 10:17 am

    you did it when I was gone

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