I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 13 June 2019
The best place
I have been doing this last week and this week at gilberthorpe school. this is the practice restaurant that i made at school.
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Hey Ema-Leigh, What a cool blog post!
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post, I think the best part is the second slide.
To improve on your work, you could add what restaurant it is and why you like it. What is your favorite take-a-way? Anyway got more blogs to comment on, see ya later.
hi Kirsty it is Ema-leigh replying.
Deletewe did this for writing so we had to make our own.
my favorite take-a-way is mcdonals or bk
Kia ora Ema-leigh, I like how your coke that it's in there it has colors. I think you need something like you need to make another slide that would be cool so everyone will see if it is the best place. bye
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ReplyDeleteHi Kian here i really like your blog it makes me a bit hungry and maybe you could explain why it is the best fast food place in the whole world bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ema-Leigh.
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post, I think the best part is the second slide.
Maybe next time you could add more??
but other than that the rest of it was pretty cool.
Blog you later.