I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Yesterday it was Thursday 19/9/2019 was the day that I and the seniors went to the Orana Wildlife Park. They said there are over four hundred animals there. We got to see only a little bit of them but the other class the older seniors got to see more than my class. We got to feed some giraffes it was funny it took a little bit of time for them to come and, some people got licked. Only one of the giraffes came over to eat. Then when we were done one of the giraffes came over for food but there was none left.these are some animals that we saw! some of them are cute some of them are mean looking and when we saw the lions the keeper said that the other lion had cancer so the brother died everybody was sad that happened. My favorite animal is the giraffe because we get to feed it. it was so fun we got to see a lot of cool animals that I didn't know.
Hello Ema-leigh, it's Venice, from Hornby Primary School in Room 7. It's so cool that you get to feed the giraffes. What kind of animals did you see? I have been to Orana Park too. Have you seen a lion before in real life? Keep up the great job Ema-Leigh.
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Yesterday it was Thursday 19/9/2019 was the day that I and the seniors went to the Orana Wildlife Park. They said there are over four hundred animals there. We got to see only a little bit of them but the other class the older seniors got to see more than my class. We got to feed some giraffes it was funny it took a little bit of time for them to come and, some people got licked. Only one of the giraffes came over to eat. Then when we were done one of the giraffes came over for food but there was none left.these are some animals that we saw! some of them are cute some of them are mean looking and when we saw the lions the keeper said that the other lion had cancer so the brother died everybody was sad that happened. My favorite animal is the giraffe because we get to feed it. it was so fun we got to see a lot of cool animals that I didn't know.
Hello Ema-leigh, it's Venice, from Hornby Primary School in Room 7. It's so cool that you get to feed the giraffes. What kind of animals did you see? I have been to Orana Park too. Have you seen a lion before in real life? Keep up the great job Ema-Leigh.
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